Feeling absolutely 'bleh' about ch.14!!
Especially, since I'm not getting much input on wether or not the story is still holding interest for anyone.
But this is all rough drafts.
It's still a lump of coal still has a ways to go and some serious buffing before it is called a diamond.
So, I did something naughty and skipped ahead and wrote the "revelation" chapter for a change of pace.
Let me just say.
Much heart break.
Total feels.
So sadness.
Like I think I'm gonna cry!
My little characters r n pain!! What am I doing to you?!?!
But I'll probably go back and read it again and realise it is utter crap.