Please tell me if I make mistakes or I should cut/add certain scenes in my writing!!
he/him, okay with they/them
I'm a trash writer.
Very cringe. Give me criticism, and suggestions. I read every comment and reply to every comment. It makes me happy reading feedback, so please leave some.
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ritooutcast
Oct 05, 2023 02:32AM
Cracked my phone. Really hard to write now. I only use my phone when it comes to Wattpad. And of course the crack is mainly at the keyboard area. RitoOutcast out for a while xdView all Conversations
Stories by ritooutcast
- 3 Published Stories
Shining Diamonds • Dawn × Lucas •...
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‹A Pokémon Sinnoh Region Fanfic!›
Dawn is a shy sixteen year old Pokémon Coordinator. She has always exc...
#227 in sinnoh
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Dragon's Future - Post TotK Zelink
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(desc kinda empty rn lol, just read it but this is a little less zelink than my other story, and more just wh...
#186 in tloz
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(early wip) ~penguins~ - Zelink Mo...
498
18
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Zelda and Link met only a year ago, but they have grown very close, and help each other with their hardships...
#834 in legendofzelda
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