Ooh, what happened to Cliques? That one was great... I really like the idea of the I Come First but please update! The other one is a bit un-detailed but I get the idea...
Also, I know it's hard but try to make your chapters more detailed and longer. First aim for 500 words, then 700 then 1000 as you progress. Mine are usually 800-1500 just to give you an idea.
A short chapter is considered 400-600 words ish I guess
Try not to drop below 400 words.
Add more detail, make me feel like I'm there and know exactly what's going on. If this isn't your strong point, add more dialogue.
USE YOUR STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES TO YOUR ADVANTAGE
I don't know what they are yet and maybe you don't either so try and write more often. You may not be adding much detail, for example, so you add more dialogue instead. However, with dialogue you have to make sure the punctuation is correct and you know who is saying what and so on.
Set a few days each week to edit drafts and update; it's always good for the readers to know when you will be updating, it creates suspense. Leave on cliffhangers too if you feel like it to make the readers want to read on, but not all writers like that style.
I can't remember what I was going to put after this lol so see ya on Thursday :)
Bye bye my my Terrible Twin☺
