hwa's bby

Hi! I'm a new writer and I just published an epistolary. I hope you can give it a shot. I would love to hear your insights. Thanks! :)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/267777322?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=hqrmione&wp_originator=6RaDJQXQ0d6R7X7dvrtaz456FmeGsnHkSNlz%2B8XVnkPeSTzngmfuS6eYw8yTZcSE2nfTmjoLYecR033Ym0aH1OvIaBGmS%2B4%2BAn9dX%2F2Bp8ax612F1RMFlUoxUeQQtFue

Please read my story
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/204663319-twilight%27s-chronicle