My writing probably isn't very elaborite so.. sorry about that. I was told by a friend of mine about this site and heard that it's a good place to get feedback on books, so please, any critisism is welcome and i hope I can improve my writing techniques through this community.
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Story by Rosie
Obsession
Jae, a young South Korean boy, is relocated with his family after a two year struggle against his obsession w...