After finding your comment asking for an opinion or review on your story, out of curiousity, I've done just that. Really, it's not that bad, it just needs something more. Your chapters are short, but that wouldn't be much of a problem, it's just that your writing is a little rushed. We don't even know if she has any siblings or why she is moving, but the main lead is already making a move so soon. Maybe a backstory inbetween, just more inner details.
1. The first chapter doesn't mention much. Just that she is moving, and describes her appearance. You could've continued by writing about her family packing up or showing how they get along possibly. Even an airport scene would've sufficed.
2. I think an editor would be a good idea. Someone who is experienced enough and can give you grammar corrections. You have some grammatical errors, but it's not that bad so don't be disappointed.
In the end, your story has potential. The plot seems to be fine, a little weak, but interesting enough to get a few reads. Please don't take this as a big insult to your story, take advantage of this. Hope this helps, keep writing.
