Hi!
Do you do critiquing only for romance stories, or for the other genres you read, too? If so, I'd be greatfull if you could take a look at my historical fiction 'Well Dead' and tell me what you think:
http://www.wattpad.com/story/2601623-well-dead
But if the summary isn't interesting enough for you, you needn't bother :)
Kind Regards
Robert