@Chrystal2 hey queen I read it only tip make the first chapter a lil bit longer so you kinda get to know the main character… but i honestly can’t say it’s bad you gotta good start just add more words and details throughout the story
Ngl your books are some of the only good ones I be finding I love the way you write in first person and really channel the character’s thoughts cs it be making me feel like I’m in the story myself