samhaoyumax

I am truly sorry if people are not liking my story, I will try to improve. 
          	
          	I got some comments saying that I was adding too much romance and that I do not like Tanjiro. Or that I was trying to make Kanao and Nezuko look like cheap girls. I do like Tanjiro, he is a very good character and I love him. I do not try to make him guilty at every point and that was not my intention. Nor was I trying to portrait Nezuko and Kanao like that, I was trying to make the reactions look as cannon as possible from my side. I am really sorry if it felt like that. 
          	
          	Though I have deleted those comments now as I did not want them as a reminder of my failure to impress them as a writer. Though I am glad that they felt that I was actually at least worth telling my mistakes. But they did really effect me as it was actually my first story plus the fact that I am very insecure of myself and had put a lot of efforts in it so I felt very bad. And really nothing against to the people, who criticized the story, they were really an eye opener for me.
          	
          	I will continue this story, though, as due to my fear of not writing as good as some expect, I can't deprive the other people, who actually are following my story to be disappointed. I will really try to improve on whatever they suggested me, though it will take a little time to edit. I am really really sorry if you guys felt that I was a bit rude to you.
          	
          	I felt the need to post this so I did.

CloneWars1234

@samhaoyumax please continue writing this masterpiece 
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samhaoyumax

@SpookyHansel  Thank You so much. <33333333
          	  I adore the way you support me. I will let them be as you said and try to ignore them. 
          	  I do sometimes plus read the other stories available to gather their views on the characters etc, so I can make them as canon as possible from my side and a little fun.
          	  Thank You once again. :D
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SpookyHansel

@samhaoyumax  though I am seeing this later I felt the need to tell you this, you are doing great. Some people are gonna hate, if they wanted to improve your character's reactions, they wouldn't have worded it in such a way. So, just leave them be.
          	  
          	  If want tips you should search the web on the characters' personality traits, it can be helpful  :))
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maeiji

This person has been copy pasting and editing a story from AO3 titled 'Demon Slayer Character Reacts to the future' by Lem0nShr00m. Although  the plot is different, there are noticeable similarities in dialogue and narration albeit some are edited. the similarities are noticeable throughout the whole work.
          

samhaoyumax

I am truly sorry if people are not liking my story, I will try to improve. 
          
          I got some comments saying that I was adding too much romance and that I do not like Tanjiro. Or that I was trying to make Kanao and Nezuko look like cheap girls. I do like Tanjiro, he is a very good character and I love him. I do not try to make him guilty at every point and that was not my intention. Nor was I trying to portrait Nezuko and Kanao like that, I was trying to make the reactions look as cannon as possible from my side. I am really sorry if it felt like that. 
          
          Though I have deleted those comments now as I did not want them as a reminder of my failure to impress them as a writer. Though I am glad that they felt that I was actually at least worth telling my mistakes. But they did really effect me as it was actually my first story plus the fact that I am very insecure of myself and had put a lot of efforts in it so I felt very bad. And really nothing against to the people, who criticized the story, they were really an eye opener for me.
          
          I will continue this story, though, as due to my fear of not writing as good as some expect, I can't deprive the other people, who actually are following my story to be disappointed. I will really try to improve on whatever they suggested me, though it will take a little time to edit. I am really really sorry if you guys felt that I was a bit rude to you.
          
          I felt the need to post this so I did.

CloneWars1234

@samhaoyumax please continue writing this masterpiece 
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samhaoyumax

@SpookyHansel  Thank You so much. <33333333
            I adore the way you support me. I will let them be as you said and try to ignore them. 
            I do sometimes plus read the other stories available to gather their views on the characters etc, so I can make them as canon as possible from my side and a little fun.
            Thank You once again. :D
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SpookyHansel

@samhaoyumax  though I am seeing this later I felt the need to tell you this, you are doing great. Some people are gonna hate, if they wanted to improve your character's reactions, they wouldn't have worded it in such a way. So, just leave them be.
            
            If want tips you should search the web on the characters' personality traits, it can be helpful  :))
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