Book Rating: 9/10 ⭐
Hello po! Goodmorning author!
Maganda po yung story niyo, and I really appreciate how clean and easy to read it is. Maayos po yung flow ng writing, and malinaw yung emotions ng characters, kaya madaling maintindihan at sundan yung story. May konti lang po akong suggestion sana po ma-improve pa nang kaunti yung pacing, especially sa ilang parts na parang ang bilis mangyari. I feel like mas lalong lalakas yung impact ng scenes if mas nabigyan pa sila ng space. Pero overall po, maganda pa rin talaga yung story. Honestly, nagalit talaga ako kay Kelvin, pero at the same time, I’m glad you wrote him that way. Hindi po natin maiiwasan na may ganitong klase ng lalaki sa totoong buhay, and it made the story feel realistic and relatable. I’m also really glad na umalis agad si Jillian. She knew her worth, and she truly deserves all the love and respect in the world. Strong female lead siya kahit medyo marupok pero sino naman ang Hindi rurupok minsan diba? If you genuinely loved that person mag e-expect katalaga na mag bago huhu pero unti unti mo rin ma realized na inuubus mo yung pagmamahal mo sakanya at wala nang natira sa sarili mo, she's also so kind and fragile as a glass and I loved that about her. Medyo nagalit din ako kay Janella kasi sana hindi na lang siya pumatol huhuhu, but again, it added conflict and depth to the story, and it showed how complicated people and choices can be. Overall, thank you for writing this story, ma’am. It was an emotional read, realistic, and meaningful. Looking forward to seeing more of your works!
