sea3sprite

I am not sure if it is a new feature of Wattpad or a beta feature they are testing, but I love, love, love getting notified when one of the comments I left an author receives a like because I get to revisit those moments in the stories.

WeiDao

Thanks so much for the follow!! I’m so glad you found True Mate; thanks so much for spending your precious time reading it. 
          
          Also thanks so much for all the comments! You’re helping me catch a lot of stuff that otherwise wouldn’t have gotten fixed; I appreciate that a lot!!
          
          I hope you have a great rest of your day/night wherever you may be <3

LeiahRoo_Writing

Hey! 
          
          I'm sorry you didn't vibe with my book Rags and Royal! Makes me sad you didn't like it. Butttt, good news is, I'm re-writing it! SO, let me know what you didn't vibe with and I will try to fix it! Thank you so much for reading it anyway! Means a lot!

LeiahRoo_Writing

@sea3sprite Oh I 100% am taking them in a positive way! I love feedback from readers! Even tho it makes me a little sad, BUT having feedback on what my readers like is what’s important! 
            
            If readers don’t like reading my books, then I’m not doing it right! But his sisters death is part of the story. Maybe I can change it to her having an illness instead of you know or something. I’ll definitely change that up! I’ll definitely delete the recaps! I’ll try to shape up the reminiscing part. This book is his book, if you know what I mean! I feel like if you went a little further you’d know what I’m talking about! But I’m still glad you took the time to read some of it and tell me what’s wrong with it!
            
            Thank you! <3
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sea3sprite

@LeiahRoo_Writing Hi!  The story has a lot of potential, it just wasn't what I was looking to read at that moment.  The  POV of it being someone reminiscing about prior events kept throwing me off, leaving no guess work to some items.  The recap at the beginning of each chapter would be OK if someone was reading as you were writing, but for a complete story and for someone who just wants to cruise thru the story, it was very repetitious.  Once the incident with the sister happened, I decided that it was time to move on.  Sorry, I hope you take these comments in the positive way that they are meant.  Good luck with the rewrite!
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LeiahRoo_Writing

Royals*
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