your stoey gives me life man you know what i love about it okay imma rant so ya better read it
first of all i actually like the way kellin didnt show up at first, at first when i stared reading it i thought he wasnt even gonna be a character in the story. i love that he is one though.
second of all i love how slow the story goes, it makes me feel like im bonding with the characters.
third of all i love the way that you describe some stuff really beautifully, and even love more the way that you choose what to describe and what not.
the adrien and kellin kiss scene is epic bc u explain how she feels and how he grabs her and you tell us how their lips moves in sync but you dont dive right in into how the kiss was, like any other story.
i love shy kellin, and the way he acts somehow makes me think this is a real story not a fanfic. idk why.
i love that you chose the name adrien because it is so uncommon.
and finally i love how she keeps calling kellin a guy that she doesnt like but then inside her head in this last chapter she referres to him as her almost boyfriend. it is funny.
please keep writing bc i really im enjoying it.
please check out my story too, ill appreciate it.
byeeee