seventyxseven85

I will have a new chapter or two in a couple days, really busy this weekend but come monday I promise to post at least one chapter.

danielleb333

hey! i was wondering if you would check out my story called innocent eyes? I've had over 8000 reads so far, so it must be good. But i guess that all depends on the reader now doesn't it? Well non the less, plz check it out. I would greatly appreciate your feedback. also vote and fan if you like. 
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          (¸.•´ (¸.•` ¤ Danielle = ) 
          
          ~~if i get a chance i will surely return the favor~~
          
          **P.S THOSE WHO KNOW ME, CHAPTER 17 IS UP!! <3 **

Damula_chikita

Hello Im Chikita
          
          I was wondering if you could pleaz read my stories called
           'I stole form him and he loves me...why?' && 'Why do things always happen to me' I really need some feedback and could you pleaz vote&&comment and possibly become a fan. Im pretty sure you'll like it :)) Thanks if you read it Id really apricate a vote!!! ill return the favor :)
          
          ~Chikita

Shelley2594

HEY!!!!! look i know you have better things to do, but i just wanted to take the time to say thanks for becoming a fan i know i dont post really fast but the thing is that i take along time on the chapters cuz i have to like it so i rewrite every chapter about 6 times....lol..... but anyway i just wanted to say thanks cuz you makes my 55th fan.......(happy dance face just for you)....yep this is the time where i say "YEP YOUR THE ONE!!!!!!!" 
          
          michelle

danielleb333

hey! i was wondering if you would check out my story called innocent eyes? I've had over 6000 reads so far, so it must be good. But i guess that all depends on the reader now doesn't it? Well non the less, plz check it out. I would greatly appreciate your feedback. also vote and fan if you like. 
          *´¨) 
          ¸.•´¸.•*´¨) ¸.•*¨) 
          (¸.•´ (¸.•` ¤ Danielle = ) 
          
          ~~if i get a chance i will surely return the favor~~
          
          
          *ps. those who know me, the new chapter is up , chapter 15 !!! *

Aetila

Hey there! 
          If you've got some extra, bored, time; I was wondering if you could read one of my stori es and comment on it! (voting , fanning, and whatever are all optional, its the reviews I need!) I'd love to return the favor, and I will! 
          I know this might annoy you, but anything is greatly appreciated! Thanks for reading this! 
          -Celeste 
          My Stories--Golden Dawn; Karis Gebelin was just your typical Hawaii transplant to Manhattan, obsessive top student who actually procrastinates everything, and bound of Ivy; future careerist and current fortune teller. Until-- that is--she finds out everything she aced is more or less a ben trevato-- so good bye model student and striving socialite--and hello demons layer/alchemist and automatic industry tycoon--that is, if she survives. 
          
          Pride, Prestige, and The Undead-- When Aislinn LeBlanc went to boarding school, she expected to be working hard and standing out with her scholastic honors and economist talents in a sea of high-society spoiled brats in their opulent playground. Little did the senator's daughter know, however, that she was entering a world where your rich and famous can kill, slaughter, and hack things like no one's business.African mythology, action, and secrets of success all come together in this tale of zombieslaying and prestige. 
          
          Empire Wars-- Kiers was fed up with his life in a small town in Iowa--until, that is, when he and his friends are offered to risk life and mind to test a new breakthrough "video game." Empire Wars was designed to be the most difficult game in the world, where dying is just too easy.
          
          P.S. I know you get a lot of these, but I'll say it; I really don't think my main characters are Mary Sues & Gary Stus, they aren't gorgeous, extremely talented, maybe have one talent, but that's it. My stories also are not centered around one cliche relationship between two gorgeous people or whatever, and I really hope you can try comment! 
          Thank you for the time!
          

danielleb333

okay, I commented on the story, so please follow up on my advice, I know your story is going to get there and be really good, you just need to add what I said.
          
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          (¸.•´ (¸.•` ¤ Danielle = )