@shaniathemighty
hey! i just checked it out and i gotta say,it's really good so far! i just recommend more personal pronouns is all,since you tend to use their names a lot instead of she/her/her's and he/him/his,just so you don't sound so repetitive. other than that,everything is good!! keep up the good work friend
@hipstercloud ahh thank you so much!the thing is,I haven't stopped writing(I'm actually writing a one shot right now)I'm just kinda busy at the moment and will be starting next week so that's probably why you haven't seen much of my stories haha but I won't stop!!
