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Hi! I'm a new writer with a new book and I was hoping you could check out my SP fanfic and maybe give tips and/ or your opinion? Much appreciation if you do!
shaniathemighty
hey! i just checked it out and i gotta say,it's really good so far! i just recommend more personal pronouns is all,since you tend to use their names a lot instead of she/her/her's and he/him/his,just so you don't sound so repetitive. other than that,everything is good!! keep up the good work friend
