15sdelicate

hey! 

15sdelicate

yea! working on that... thank u!!
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shawmilacamendes

@15sdelicate I really like ur style of writing but I was wondering if u could split really long passages into multiple paragraphs so it could be easier for the reader to read and not get bored or skip lines!
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15sdelicate

i was wondering if i could get your feedback on my new story...
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