shiieri

I really want some feedback on this if anyone would be willing.
          	
          	I have been writing TPaTM for a long time now. I didn't mean for this to go on so long - I don't even have a plot outline. However, I'm not giving up on it.
          	
          	I've been writing Haruka very OOC since like chapter 3. I think I put a disclaimer, but it still shows my inability as a writer. I want to get better - to be able to show clear personalities of already written characters.
          	
          	My writing style has been juvenile. Too much dialogue, short, choppy chapters, and awful romance scenes. I'm not going to rewrite any of the earlier chapters, because I want to show my growth of an author, but I do want to start fixing this.
          	
          	Chapters may be far and few in between from now on, and I'm very sorry! I know quite a few people are counting on me, but there's only so much I can do. I hope everyone has a wonderful day/night! ♡

shiieri

I really want some feedback on this if anyone would be willing.
          
          I have been writing TPaTM for a long time now. I didn't mean for this to go on so long - I don't even have a plot outline. However, I'm not giving up on it.
          
          I've been writing Haruka very OOC since like chapter 3. I think I put a disclaimer, but it still shows my inability as a writer. I want to get better - to be able to show clear personalities of already written characters.
          
          My writing style has been juvenile. Too much dialogue, short, choppy chapters, and awful romance scenes. I'm not going to rewrite any of the earlier chapters, because I want to show my growth of an author, but I do want to start fixing this.
          
          Chapters may be far and few in between from now on, and I'm very sorry! I know quite a few people are counting on me, but there's only so much I can do. I hope everyone has a wonderful day/night! ♡

shiieri

Chapter 10 is posted for The Prince and the Merman! Sorry it's been awhile.
          
          I got into a wreck a few weeks ago. No one was hurt, thank goodness, but it's taken some time to get back to normal. "Return to Normalcy" as my history teacher would say X3 (man I love the 1920's)
          
          Hope you enjoy the new update!

shiieri

Ahh so many followers in just a week or two thank you all so much!!! I'm so sorry chapters are coming out slowly, I'm in school or thinking about school most of the time, and Halloween is coming up so I'm trying to get a cosplay and all. 
          
          But never fear! I have chapters on drafts, so they will be out ASAP for all of my stories, Fanfiction or real. 
          
          but seriously thank you so much for all the votes, comments, and follows.