Hey, honestly I really loved your story!
It’s written so beautifully — the concept, emotions, and flow are amazing. I just wanted to share a small suggestion, please don’t take it the wrong way. If you could keep Shubman’s character a bit more real and sweet — like how he is in real life, respectful and grounded — it would make the story feel even more natural and relatable. Also, it would be nice if the story stays real-based with just fictional touches.
And about Sara, maybe instead of adding her as a main part, she could just be mentioned in the context of rumours — since the female lead deserves to remain the main focus.
Your writing is already wonderful, I’m just sharing this because I genuinely loved it and want to see it become even more perfect! ❤️