I am not god so don't expect me to be perfect. I am not your best friend so don't expect me to understand your madness. I am not your parents so don't expect to give a crap about your feelings. I am generally nice to people so if I am mean to you, you got to ask yourself why. 

I don't judge but sometimes people need to understand when writing a book stick to the natural laws of how that story is meant to be. don't undercut a part because you don't like it or because you want to speed the story up. No. It doesn't work like that you can't be all over the place and then expect others to go with it. If you want your book to be taken seriously you do that hard work and show them what it is like inside that royal castle that is your mind. you can do it don't let anyone say you can't ....I am inspired by many people when I read books, because they let their crazy but logical mind roam freely. when I leave a comment on your book and it is not all smiles and party, don't feel offended I am telling you a polite truth especially because it caughty eye  sight while I was searching.

its ok if you get writers block along the way, just don't rush it and failing in the end just to make others happy.

everyone has to learn from now that they can't sent themselves on fire to keep others warm. It ain't life if you ain't got freedom.

Please don't ask me to edit for you and then after I do you going to complaint that I didn't do shit for you. You don't want a editor you want someone who will write your story. I will never change what you write I will only try to make it sound more interesting. Lastly most of us here are from two different country with two different English experience  so don't think I don't know English but your way of it is different from mine.

Make no mistake I will tell you things that would make yo wish you were never born.