silverose12

@Schmilea You deserve them, you're a truly amazing writer!!! Everything about your story is wonderful, except one minor thing: your punctuation and occasionally grammar. (Sorry for criticism, I'm like a born editor; I edit EVERYTHING, although it's usually in my head.) :) YOU'RE TALENTED!

Schmileaa

@silverose12 Awhh thanks & haha yeah no I appreciate all the critiques I can get. Grammar and I don't get along particularly well all of the time:D BUT THANKS SO MUCH! MEANS A LOT <3
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silverose12

@Schmilea You deserve them, you're a truly amazing writer!!! Everything about your story is wonderful, except one minor thing: your punctuation and occasionally grammar. (Sorry for criticism, I'm like a born editor; I edit EVERYTHING, although it's usually in my head.) :) YOU'RE TALENTED!

Schmileaa

@silverose12 Awhh thanks & haha yeah no I appreciate all the critiques I can get. Grammar and I don't get along particularly well all of the time:D BUT THANKS SO MUCH! MEANS A LOT <3
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