@skillfuxk Hii I just read your story as you asked, it's a good start I could say :) just keep writing and don't care about the bad English or the other good writers, the most important thing is that you enjoy writing :) my English is not that perfect too as it's not my first language and I believe I don't have the perfect story but I'm trying to improve myself and you should too, just step by step you'll improve yourself and correct every error and maybe you'll be a famous author one day :)
Anyway that's all I wanted to say just keep going don't let anything stop you.
P.S : just a small note, don't use shortcuts or chat language such as 'omg' just do a straight 'oh my god' ... Someone actually notified me about that before and I thought I should tell you too
I talked too much byee xx