ofc<3 well for starters, the way you format your writing. there’s nothing wrong with the way you write for when the characters speak (for example - billie: hi). maybe start using quotation marks for when a character speaks because I found that most people like reading that way better. second make sure you have a good plot line for the story your making. like before hand plan out your story, for example, know how you want the story to end and what type of stuff you want involved in it. third, tags. have tags that revolve around what your story is about ( for example- #billie #billieeilish if it’s a story abt her and like #smut if there’s smut in it) because you’ll get a lot of reads, people look at tags. have a good description (not for a imagines book obviously). make sure its appealing to audiences, make it interesting so people will feel a urge to read it but don’t tell to much abt the book in the description so people will want to read to find out more. always re read what you write. if you don’t like what you read other people might not. find inspiration in other books but DO NOT copy cause people hate that. if there’s something more specific you want advice on just let me know:)