smith83

hey liked your story it was good. the sister killing the brother. i would love if you would read my stories and give feedback.
          
          His Bite is the Sweetest Poison (it is not a vampire story) 
          Genre: Fantasy, Romance    Tags: Demons, witches, werewolves, love
          
          Allison has just moved to Rose Valley to get away from all of the painful memories of her past. Nothing much goes on in Rose Valley so she feels right at home. One day she’s exploring the town when she runs across a bar called The Crimson Moon. But it wasn’t all that it seemed. The owner offers her a job and after some thinking she takes it. What she doesn’t realize is that by taking the job she has just ruined her chance of ever having the normal life she wanted again. Strange things start to happen to her and the only one who can really explain anything is this one boy who not only goes to her school but hangs out at the bar she works at.
          
          The Lost Throne of Celis  
          Genre: Fantasy, Romance    Tags: Demons, witches, werewolves, guardians, Fae, love,                         
                                                                 Mystical beasts
          
          Salicia has lived with her adopted family ever since she was 6. Her parents just disappeared one day without a trace leaving her with nothing more than a strange locket.
          When she turns 18 she starts to get confusing dreams and hears someone calling her when no one is around. One day she ventures to a forbidden forest and gets transported to a world filled with ancient powers, guardians and…magick academies. Welcomed as the last hope of Astonia, Salicia has to figure out why she was chosen.
          

Hey. :) 
          You know what would be so kick ass? If you would read my story called "Breaking Julien," and maybe even comment or become a fan? 
          Again, that would be super kick ass. 
          
          Thanks, 
          Ave.

Hey can you do me a favor? In your spare time could you read my stories? Me and my friend moira started this story called the GWGs but just like any story there are always two sides. Whose side will you choose Salina or Jasmine? (FYI im doing Salina) 
          
          And my other story is called Jungle Fever. Could you imagine getting an opportunity to met the man of your dreams? Well Odessa Smith can. Actually she has a million times before but she soon realizes that hes not the same guy she sees in magazines. He's actually a jerk and now because of her starstrukked-ness shes stranded with him as her only companion. 
          
          Fans Votes Comments and Likes welcome and appreciated. 
          
          And if you'd like me to read your just leave a message on my message board.

hello. (: 
          i know this is going to be a very irritating message, but i really need your help. see, i know people don't particularly like twilight anymore becuse it is totally over-rated - and i totally agree - but i just posted this fanfiction and i was wondering if you think i should continue? 
          
          if you don't like twilight, then feel free to ignore this, but i would really appreciate it. basically, i wrote it ages ago and i recently found it, so i decided to post it. 
          
          i promise is it's not a typical story; the storyline isn't half bad, so i would seriously appreciate any feedback. 
          
          although, please, if you could; some proper critisicm and improvements are much needed. im o wattpad to become better, not to go offline with some 'interesting' comments. so, please... fire the critisicm at me; il take it and deal with it. (: 
          
          thankyou, ever so much, 
          creatingbalance_ 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/488290-echoing-sunlight

hey i would love if you would read my stories and tell me what you think. vote and maybe fan? send a message and i will return the favor
          
          His Bite is the Sweetest Poison (it is not a vampire story) 
          Genre: Fantasy, Romance    Tags: Demons, witches, werewolves, love
          
          Allison has just moved to Rose Valley to get away from all of the painful memories of her past. Nothing much goes on in Rose Valley so she feels right at home. One day she’s exploring the town when she runs across a bar called The Crimson Moon. But it wasn’t all that it seemed. The owner offers her a job and after some thinking she takes it. What she doesn’t realize is that by taking the job she has just ruined her chance of ever having the normal life she wanted again. Strange things start to happen to her and the only one who can really explain anything is this one boy who not only goes to her school but hangs out at the bar she works at.
          
          The Lost Throne of Celis  
          Genre: Fantasy, Romance    Tags: Demons, witches, werewolves, guardians, Fae, love,                         
                                                                 Mystical beasts
          
          Salicia has lived with her adopted family ever since she was 6. Her parents just disappeared one day without a trace leaving her with nothing more than a strange locket.
          When she turns 18 she starts to get confusing dreams and hears someone calling her when no one is around. One day she ventures to a forbidden forest and gets transported to a world filled with ancient powers, guardians and…magick academies. Welcomed as the last hope of Astonia, Salicia has to figure out why she was chosen.
          

Hi! :)
          
          I just wanted to say thanks for becoming a fan! It really means a lot to me and it's super appreciated!! :P