@the_original_normal hey, am back. I know it's really late and it's kinda weird to be reading at this time, but I just happened to pick up your first book about 45 minutes ago. I really enjoyed your story, but I have a few tips for you to use in your future writing pieces. Little grammatical errors occur in every writer's writing, and while it personally doesn't bother me much, I know it can be a turn off for others. I also would suggest describing your characters physical appearance to help with imagery and all that stuff. Otherwise, fantastic job! Keep writing, you might just hit it big one day, ;)
