benez3

Hello there! I would like to ask if you have any spare time to read my book called Forever, You. It would be nice to have more opinions on it since it's my first book. It would be most appreciated.
          Thank you! 

nikkib101

What do you think Ava should do? Im a little blocked...

starksmonica

Victor has a right to be apart of the pregnancy and with his child... But he has to work for Tippy!  He has to earn her trust... Make her feel loved and safe. Protect her, stand up for her and be that MAN that I feel he can be. Time out for the temper tantrums... Either piss or get off the pot!
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starksmonica

I feel that Ava is a strong woman that feel in love.  And in that love became weak because of the boundaries and victor's craziness.  She survived being beaten by her ex boyfriend and left in a stairwell.  She is beautiful and talented.  And now she is going to become a mom.  I want her to stop running and taking the easy way out by committing suicide.  
            
            I understand that she loves Victor (and I want them to work) but does victor really loves her?  Or the person he has made her in his mind.  I think they are two different people.  She needs to get therapy for herself and her baby.  She needs to get healthy for herself and her child.  She needs to know that she can stand alone and so does victor.  Victor needs to understand that any relationship she allows, not that he pushes by showing up and bombarding his way in to her life, will be because that's what she wants.  Victor needs to truly understand that his wife is a woman to be treasured and love, not someone to be controlled and beaten.  He has to learn to trust her and believe in her love or they will never work.  He was wrong to pursue tippy while having his girlfriend living in their home.  He was wrong for not standing up for his wife while his girlfriend berated her.  He is acting like a child not a man.  Which one is he?  This is book 2 and I would like to see some progression in the main characters, especially in maturity and personal growth.
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