Hi, sorry to bother you, but I just read chapters 1 and 2 and I think the beginning is great. I'm no expert, but I think you could break it up into shorter chapters to make it more captivating, since there are several "3 days later" sections. That could add suspense and leave readers wondering what happens next. Next, you need to organise the information you put in the chapters because, although I love all the information and it's relevant, some readers sometimes don't understand the flood of information. Now it's up to you to do what you want, but in any case, it's a good start :))
