stormy_mcanne

Ok guys I need some help. Today I published two scenes from two separate books I'm planning to write. I am planning to expand on these but I'm not really sure where to go with them yet. Please read them and if you have any ideas or suggestions I'd really appreciate it!  (What I've already written doesn't have to be the beginning, it could also be somewhere in the middle. I'm also trying to stay away from any cliches.) Thanks! <3