storytime_beststorys
Hey just to let anyone know if they read this is that if you don't like the story tell me and I will try and remake it or make it better or if you can please give me some tips thank you
storytime_beststorys
@storytime_beststorys thanks also sorry for this late response and no I haven't and I will see if I can and thank you so much and I glad you like it, it means so much to me
henvick
@storytime_beststorys Your story concept is really intriguing, the idea of ten friends, a devastating war, and one missing friend returning completely changed adds so much tension. The mystery around her secrets and that Phaedrus-inspired theme, “things are not always what they seem,” gives it a strong mythic edge too. By the way, have you already published this book on Amazon or Goodreads? I’d love to take a look at it there if it’s available.