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stratagen12
Apr 20, 2015 12:58AM
I fixed chapter one I think, especially the confrence scene to the end. Let me know what you think please. Just a heads up, I will probably update the beginning as well before I post chapter 2View all Conversations
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The Dark
Jonathan, is one of the smartest scientists in the world. A member of the New Imperial Earth military, he des...