suchihwa

so just got a courage to post my poem. Hope you will like it and guide me on further improvements.

hybrx_d

@suchihwa not really, its fine the way it is :)
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suchihwa

@suchihwa thank u @teen-nymphet. my 1st works. any suggestions 9n improvement?
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suchihwa

so just got a courage to post my poem. Hope you will like it and guide me on further improvements.

hybrx_d

@suchihwa not really, its fine the way it is :)
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suchihwa

@suchihwa thank u @teen-nymphet. my 1st works. any suggestions 9n improvement?
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