محادثات suchihwa

Nov 17, 2015 01:44PM

so just got a courage to post my poem. Hope you will like it and guide me on further improvements.

@suchihwa not really, its fine the way it is :)

Nov 29, 2015 • الرد

@suchihwa thank u @teen-nymphet. my 1st works. any suggestions 9n improvement?

Nov 20, 2015 • الرد

@suchihwa its good :)

Nov 20, 2015 • الرد

Nov 17, 2015

so just got a courage to post my poem. Hope you will like it and guide me on further improvements.

@suchihwa not really, its fine the way it is :)

Nov 29, 2015 • الرد

@suchihwa thank u @teen-nymphet. my 1st works. any suggestions 9n improvement?

Nov 20, 2015 • الرد

@suchihwa its good :)

Nov 20, 2015 • الرد