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Hey author sorry to bother you. Actually I'm new to writing and don't know how my books will reach to readers that's why I'm posting it here. If you feel bothered you can remove it, or if possible please give it a try and give some feedback. Thank you and sorry again.
          Here is the link if you wanna try this book:
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/410667227?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=mrinmoyiashraf

Hlo, i am not quite sure If I am allowed to post this here, so feel free to delete it if it bothers you.
          
          I just published a yoonmin book and it would mean a lot to me, if you'd give it a try and tell me your opinion about it.
          
          This is my first yoonmin book so I am a bit new to this ship, which is why every reader is special <3
          
          I hope to see your comments and votes in my book and really hope this post didn't offend you in any sort of way.
          
          Here is the link if you would want to give this book a try:https://www.wattpad.com/story/408062951?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=YooniexJm

Hi! I hope you don't mind me commenting here. I'm a small writer trying to grow, and I recently started a story. If you enjoy emotional fantasy with mystery and soft yet complex characters, I'd be really grateful if checked it out. No pressure at all
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/406279141?utm

Hlo there its me Rose Yar I know you must be mad but honestly It takes me time to realise and understand things. Wont you forgive me