I've read it. I kinda like the vibes of the book(mainly bcs I love action), but I think you should change the description of the book so it would be more short yet interesting. Also try to change the structure of your writing so it doesn't look like there's no space whatsoever. Ya know what I mean? Like give spaces between the paragraphs so it's easy to read. As for the flow, don't rush it. Explain the situation, emotion, and surrounding more clearly so readers could imagine it greatly. For the main idea, I think you got it mate, xoxo.
