taleretro

I recently came back from the dead and updated my first chapter and recently added a new one to Perspective. I will also be writing a new story for Halloween and will submit it for reading on a story-telling Channel on Youtube.

I wanted to know if you could give me tips on how to write more realistly for my book titled "Her Red Room" Please give it quick read - ONLY IF YOU WANT THOUGH -  and I would like some feedback. Keep on writing ;)

Hi there! I just discovered you! I finished reading your book called Mama - and it was brilliant, everything was so real, the way the girls felt the strange presence, the way the mother killed the father! It was really impressive!