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Did your phone die again and your laptop isn't opening the website??
          
          Two weeks ago you said you will update on every Sunday, yet you haven't updated for 2 Sundays

??????

@Colin_Creevy_PRANBIR probably tonight 

Hello Everyone, 
          It has been pointed out to me that there are repeated parts in the second chapter of Entangled in Fate. 
          Although, in my writer's section, it wasn't showing up for me, it is a mistake from my side. I had edited this chapter in two different devices so that may have caused this as there were some issues while publishing the chapter or it may have been caused when I was copy pasting the chapter from my word to Wattpad. 
          I sincerely apologise for the mistake. 
          I have unpublished the chapter and I will publish it again after ensuring that all the repeated parts are gone. 
          Thank you for your patience. 
          T. 

Here is another idea for a short story. 
          
          This is based on plot where Ranbir was trying to marry Prachi by cheat in the temple. (When ABHIGYA too got married) 
          
          In the show, Ranbir backed out but in this plot, Ranbir actually goes through the marriage and married Prachi, shocking her to the core. She slapped him and started to go from there, saying she doesn't accept this marriage but Baljit Dadi and Sarita Dadi were also at that temple and they see them getting married and Baljit Dadi insisted that today's muhrat was such that any couple who got married today were inseparable/ they cannot deny this marriage. 
          
          Rhea, who had also come to that temple witnessed all this and went home crying. PRANBIR and ARHANA and both the grannys also follow her ( Prachi is compelled by Baljit Dadi to accept the marriage as it has already happened) Meanwhile ABHIGYA had returned to Mehra mansion after getting married and everyone was having good time when Abhi asked where was Rhea. Before anyone could answer, Rhea comes home crying and tells everyone about PRANBIR marriage and says that Prachi has stolen her Ranbir. Before anyone can come out of this shock, PRANBIR and other come there. Pallavi and Alia start to badmouth Prachi but Ranbir jumps to her defense.

Hello Everyone! 
          I have published the second part of the third one shot. I hope you guys like it. I'm open to writing os and ts. 
          Thank you. 

Hey, are you fine??

I lost someone very close and dear to me last night. I probably won't be able to update for a few weeks. I'll try to come back as soon as I can. 
          I hope you all understand and if you could then please send a prayer for my Baba. 
          Thank you so much. 

You asked for suggestion for a long story, so here it's one.
          
          It's based on bigamy plot. Everything upto Ranbir and Rhea honeymoon; that was foiled by Prachi, should be same as that in show. Next up was Vikram and Pallavi's anniversary function. 
          
          In the show we see that PRANBIR make up during that party and unofficially reunite (until that horrible Mahashivratri night plot of Rhea pretending to have slept with Ranbir)
          
          But in your story, show them at odds with each other in Vikram Pallavi's anniversary party too. Show that Prachi and Siddharth were quietly working in the background to expose Rhea and Alia, to prove that those plotted the entire scene of Prachi and Siddharth found on one bed by Ranbir. 
          
          Prachi and Siddharth should prove in front of all the guests that Rhea and Alia planned the character assassination of Prachi and Siddharth. 
          
          This should send Ranbir in overwhelming guilt and grief and he should grovel on his knees in front of Prachi; but Prachi should pack her bags and leave Kohli mansion, stating that the objective she'd come there: to prove her innocence and expose the culprits has been accomplished and she doesn't have anything to stay for.
          
          And next you should show how Ranbir redeems himself and wins Prachi's forgiveness. 
          
          This would be one of the best stories, if executed properly.

Hey, please keep on writing PRANBIR stories. It was like a breath of fresh air when I found your profile