@thankspete182
You have fire music taste
@The_Cocoa_Puffs_ and ive also seen this thing that says ‘I dont love ryan ross like i did yesterday but the truth is he could slit my throat and id apologize for bleeding on his shirt’.. ur pfp made me think of that and i also love ryan ross
So just read through your book of imagines-- you clearly have ideas. I would say if you want to improve, I'd work on your syntax, your grammar (punctuation, making sure each piece of dialogue starts on a new line, capitalization of first letters in a sentence, etc). I'd also try to give more descriptions and context when it comes to the setting, what each character is doing, etc. But I think if you keep on writing you will get better. Hope this feedback helps!! It's helpful to read other author's fics and see how they write their characters and lay their fics out. Good luck! And thank you for your support :) <3
@marissa182ava thank you so much! i didnt think you would actually read them but i really appreciate it! ill be sure to take note on what you said! i really love your fics! thank you again :)
