@JolteonTM yes and i dont mean you post chapters too fast by all means post em in a speed your comfortable in but i think you should make the chapters longer and space out the in story time between events like i dunno you could’ve made it longer the time of the start of the story and the part where they start to have feelings but these are just mere suggestions
@JolteonTM i’d prefer to be called by thatkidwhosreading since Paul is my actual name and i feel uncomfortable being called by my personal name by someone i never saw the face of said person