JolteonTM

I'm glad that ur my first fan anyways

thatkidwhosreading

@JolteonTM yes and i dont mean you post chapters too fast by all means post em in a speed your comfortable in but i think you should make the chapters longer and space out the in story time between events like i dunno you could’ve made it longer the time of the start of the story and the part where they start to have feelings but these are just mere suggestions
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JolteonTM

 I've stopped doing that after your comment. Have you read my latest ones yet?
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thatkidwhosreading

@JolteonTM the book is good but im just suggesting tips like the pacing of your book, its too fast
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