For the life of me I can't navigate this site! I can't find your reply, so I hope this makes sense.
What I mean by covering a lot of ground quickly is that you're light on details, or at least inconsistently detailed: where they are, how they respond physically to the dialog, inner thoughts or feelings, sight, sound, smells, etc. So in 500 words you blast through three different scenes mostly with dialog. Sometimes it's easy to tell whose talking, but other times it's hard to follow and took me a couple reads. I'd just really would like more of your writing and for the story to give me a few more details to paint the picture of each scene. I totally get if that's not your style, just something I noticed, and your tumblr post asked for feedback. :)
