Miriam_111

I really like the atmosphere of your story! You’ve done a great job making the world feel interesting and keeping the story engaging. I’m definitely curious to see where it goes next. What part of the story was the most fun for you to write?

the1who_criez

@Miriam_111 
            I think my most favourite/fun part to write was the beginning because I made it extra engaging to the best that I can and I'm proud of how well the cliphanger really got many people
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da_goat1133

Hey! I just read your story and I really liked it! But i think you should add more conversations in them, because personally for me, I LOVE when stories have 60% dialogue and 40% other words, but I really like you story over all!

da_goat1133

Your welcome!
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the1who_criez

OKAYY!! TYY FOR THE FEEDBACKK!!
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