I tell the truth but my criticism is constructive. I give detail about what I like and don't like in a story. I also explain why I dislike certain things.
I will read your work if it interests me.
First Born: 2 out of 5 stars. The story line is decent and original. The author is the one who brought the score way down. She fails to develop characters and ignores the majority of her main characters family through out the story. Her grammar is sloppy and it is clear that she has not proof read a single thing. She is also extremely repetitive with her word choice, and fails in her descriptions.
Paying for His Mistakes: 5 out of 5 stars. This story line is not only original, but it is also extremely intriguing. This writer does extremely well with her characterization and description. She clearly uses effort in her writing, and deserves acknowledgment for her wording. Each description is full of gorgeous words that roll off of ones tongue, and keep you focused on the story. Dadelik is without a doubt, one of the most talented writers on wattpad.
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the_harsh_critic
Jun 14, 2012 03:17AM
@ProudlyNigerian Sorry haha i should have said I'm happy you made a story line, a good one.View all Conversations