Lauren

Would u pllllzzzzz critique my book well what ive written so far

Would you critique my book?

@ProudlyNigerian Sorry haha i should have said I'm happy you made a story line, a good one.

What exactly do you mean by i love that you actually made a story?

@elenamoreno25 Wait I sent you a message? Huh don't remember that one...  Well maybe I did but I don't remember haha.  I know you can write how you want just don't think you're gonna get published.  If one thing bugs me its people who think they're good but in reality they have some work.

@loveme2death 
          
          No your wrong becaus the message I got on my PM is verbatum to yours..So it was you and hey like i said I will write what i want how I want don't read my stories or worry about it.
          
          Plain and simple.

@elenamoreno25 I only have one account on wattpad...? Well except for the first one I made but I couldn't access it after I made it so I just created a new one.  And you don't normally have a series of short stories, but what ever.  Work on your plot lines, maybe add some originality.  Get creative like those published writers you see out there.  You know the ones who are extraordinary.

So don't read.........
          
          Plain and simple.
          
          I do find myself wondering why you felt the need to create another account just to post the same message on my PM you had already posted on one of my stories.. (Yes because they are short stories not books  :o )
          
          Gosh I feel honored...
          

@Dragonair99 Hi:)

Hello! :D