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I can't read Oye Gurbaani. Is it deleted??
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@NamBWon kind of yes... for time being.. wasn't getting responses... thought may be people didn't like how storyline was proceeding... will be back after sometime
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Next chapter of JDP is up. Don’t forget to vote and comment your thoughts…
I can't read Oye Gurbaani. Is it deleted??
@NamBWon kind of yes... for time being.. wasn't getting responses... thought may be people didn't like how storyline was proceeding... will be back after sometime
Next chapter of JDP is up. Don’t forget to vote and comment your thoughts…
Ojii meri soni author update de do tusi please 💖🤌
@ecstasyks oh ji koi gall nhi jii... Happy Birthday to you jii tusi hmesa khush rho..
@ecstasyks waise to mene chapter mein bola tha ki m shaayad hi update kru but i will try... but mein phir bta deti hu... its my bday tomorrow and i have been busy the entire week..outings...shopping.... i dont even have my ipad with me.. thats why i am unable to write... its kinda tough to write on phone for me. Baaki so sorry again... uper se log vote nhi kr rhe to mera thoda mood bhi upset tha... please thoda aur wait krlo... mera bday time is family time...🫂
I am disappointed because of the response on last chapter. I mean 600+ reads... and 137 votes... in 4 days...
I was happy that vote count had started crossing 170... ab same issue... honestly.. aise mein mera mnn hi nhi krta likhne ka... hrr din ek nya reader hota hai... iss book pe... almost.... phir bhi aisa response... nhi pasand aa rhi book... to bhi bol do bhai... mein naa kru mehnat.. kuki time nhi hota free kisi ke paas...bhai zero motivation... kya likhu... paise nhi maang rhi.... bss votes hi to chaiye....
@that_pahadi_gurl Thank you girl.... its just kabhi kabhi overwhelming chal rha hota hai sb... i put in effort to write... aur mujhe bss chaiye thodu sa appreciation
@the_infinite_flame I’m a new reader here, and I honestly don’t understand how this story doesn’t have more votes! 🥹❤️ Your writing deserves so much more appreciation. I’m really enjoying the story and I’ll definitely be staying till the end. Keep writing, author! 🫶🏻✨
Gauri is published full for a day.
Hi dear kya ap meri story yukti his stalking obsession pdoge please this is really worth of reading
Heyyy author.. im new.. I would be glad if you give my book a chance and encourage your readers to see it once too!
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Yr don't u think jinna arjan powerful aa oh hun v kydrat nu vapis liya skda i mean odi fam8ly nu maarke ya kuj v krk
Even if kudrat case v file krdi tavi dhmki de skda
I mean agr real lyf hundi ta ahi hunda
Mai shocked one kudrat te htth n chkya hje
Sb kuj te kr hi ditaa ode naal
@rubaab1 He knows that ki psychology manipulation long run tak kaam aati hai....you don't have to raise your hand to control someone....even oh powerful aa par oh politician vi aa ohnu pta aa ki kado ki chaal chlni...oh apni reputation te dagg ni chahunda tah hi ohne oste haje tak hath ni chukya......real life ch vi politician psychological manipulation krde ne taaki kaam vi hoje tah ohna te ilzam vi na lge par kudrat strong aa te ohde papa vi ohde naal ne....te real life ch kudiyan ni dba ditta janda ae... especially mummy kade sath ni dendi....
I have answered your query in the latest chapter 36. I must say, you are the first person to observe that. I am really happy that you did. Thank you.
Hi there, author. I know you aren't in your best state of health right now and I hope you recover soon. I have 2 questions for you, just please take 5 miutes to answer them.
1. How far along are we in the story JDP, I mean how much of the story is done with, 2/3rd, 1/2? Are we in the final act yet? I don't need a definite number of chapters. I am only curious about it, please don't take it otherwise.
2. After your complete recovery, which I pray happens soon, if you don't go on unusually long sabbaticals and keep updating at the rate you are now, can you give a time- frame in which the story will be over, like the next 3 months, or maybe 4?
Please keep up the good work. I am thoroughly enjoying the story though the purpose of asking the questions was that I want to devour the story like a novel, at once, after it's complete, and not like a serialised story, like they did in the times gone by.
Please induldge me for 10 minutes here.
Alright. I get your point.
Though you might have read feedback on Arjan's character which leans towards him and Kudrat not being the endgame, I trust your choice on where the plot goes because I feel you wouldn't let it go berserk. Personally, I would like her to de- center men from her life for at least 5 years, finish her education and establish herself professionally. De- centering men and patriarchy would be incomplete without her mother's repentance and her in- laws incarceration, if not legally then financially, socially and professionally. There's no hope for his side of the family for any redemption, only punishment would bring true catharsis as reader.
Take care of yourself. I would return to your wall once the story is done to share my thoughts.
@Khush21 Honestly speaking i have a plot in mind but i don't know how many chapters will it take to complete that... and every other days a new idea pops in and i feel like adding that as well... obviously as per the plot... now we are at the point.. where everyone will get to know about arjan's deeds... then i want a redemption for him... i cant disclose if he will end up with kudrat after that or not... i dont want to tell if there is another male lead as well or not... cz honestly i am confused about that one thing if she does not end up with him. Also i want to highlight a future for kudrat... i mean career wise, love wise ... where arjan is not the highlight... if arjan does not end up with kudrat.. what will happen with him? These are a few things i want to cover up... also i am writing for the first time.. so i really dont know how to tell an exact timeline for such extensive plot... if i get well... bilkul achhe se.. like daily post basis.. to i will complete it jaldi se.. obvio i wont let it reach 100 chapters... that is too much for me... ab m bhi thoda comfused hu to m kaise btaau ki kitna time lgega?
I will update tomorrow. I am so sorry for the delay, but i had guests over at my place.
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