thesavagegod

I edited The Distant Planet (still going on- unpublished the chapters) 
          	And I'm re-publishing em. I recommend you go and read them again.

fadednightsky

@thesavagegod yeah, I'll pm you with a list
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thesavagegod

@shotarupa963 Woah, you're the first person to tell me that.
          	  Everyone until now said they got hyped by reading it.
          	  Can you name some other areas I can improve? I can't change the storyline you see...
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fadednightsky

@thesavagegod yeah distant planet, I can't really figure out what is going on, and it's not really intriguing but I read most of it
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thesavagegod

I edited The Distant Planet (still going on- unpublished the chapters) 
          And I'm re-publishing em. I recommend you go and read them again.

fadednightsky

@thesavagegod yeah, I'll pm you with a list
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thesavagegod

@shotarupa963 Woah, you're the first person to tell me that.
            Everyone until now said they got hyped by reading it.
            Can you name some other areas I can improve? I can't change the storyline you see...
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fadednightsky

@thesavagegod yeah distant planet, I can't really figure out what is going on, and it's not really intriguing but I read most of it
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thesavagegod

I've started writing the sequel to the Distant Planet! I will start publishing soon.

thesavagegod

@notsrikarv thanks (for a gazillionth time)
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thesavagegod

@notsrikarv And I was thinking thanking people was not my style until now. 
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