storyby_shine
@tigerlily__17 take your time... thanku✨
tigerlily__17
@delusional_girl97 I'll. When I get time.
storyby_shine
@tigerlily__17 hey dear you can check new out new chapter in Ishq junoon... I uploaded new chapter hope you gonna like it.... I try to give the vibe you want in my story.. - shine ✨
storyby_shine
@tigerlily__17 thanku ❤️
tigerlily__17
@delusional_girl97 waiting for it then....
storyby_shine
@tigerlily__17 sure I'll try ..... Thanku so much for your suggestion I'm gonna work on my writing skills.... I'll give you the junoon vibe for sure....❤️❤️
tigerlily__17
@delusional_girl97 I said it's similar to Raabata so it's quite boaring reading same scene with different names, and it's too common. Because these scenes we had read in many books and even movies! You know try to add more tadka!! And look how your book becomes awesome! And also I don't get those dialogues like some are in brackets then others are not this type of stuff is making hard to understand the story. And yeh remember to add stuff related to your story name. Because your story says "Ishq Junoon" so add junoon thing and ishq is already present so yeh. And few chapters were like something is missing from between like seriously Everyone's point of view is just super confusing. Otherwise it's good.
storyby_shine
@tigerlily__17 thanku so much for your suggestion nd support, I'll try to make them intresting , after that hope you like it but I didn't copy any raabata scene bcuz I don't want to copy anyone hard I respect all authors nd yeahhh sure I'm gonna make it intresting, the new part I just wrote without interest bcuz some problem. But I promise upcoming chapters I'll make more interesting.... Thanku so much for reading my book...❤️❤️✨
storyby_shine
Thanku so much reading nd vote for my book ISHQ JUNOON.....
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tigerlily__17
Idk if you read Raabata by @delusional_af_xoxo or not but it so similar which make Ishq Junoon so boring !
tigerlily__17
@delusional_girl97 it was quite good in starting but those new parts are kinda boaring and comman! And it's too similar to Raabata which I already read so ik what will happen next in Ishq Junoon. Make it more interesting and clear so readers can get what is happening in story! Dialogues are messy, it should be neat and clear. Hope you're not offended but try to make understanding, interesting and something new! Almost every scene is common! I had read in lot's of stories and even in movies! To be honest these new chapters were so boaring that I was not even able to read till end.