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thisusernamistakenis
"I've gone through everything: from watching my people die to being empty as nothingness," Lucian hisses with a soft smile.
"Why are you even still alive, then?," she asks, not quite understanding his reasons.
"Who? Me?," he smirks at her question. "Who lied to you like that?"
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This is not a vampire novel—this is the vampire novel.
Welcome to "From the Dead to a Heartbeat", the world full of vamps, werewolves, demons and witches to which you'll be hooked real soon!
Genres:
-Vampire
-Werewolf
-Mystery
-Humor
-Thriller
-Horror
-Teenfiction
-Dark Romance
Hope you visit such novel! ♥️♥️♥️
https://www.wattpad.com/story/406692881?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=thisusernamistakenis
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🚨 ATTENTION SCI-FI & THRILLER AUTHORS 🚨
IS YOUR STORY AGENT-READY?
Hi! I’m Tofunmi Pen Professional Beta Reader + Editor
Specializing in: Sci-Fi, Thriller, Fantasy, Action.
I help Wattpad authors go from good idea to HOLY CRAP I CAN’T STOP READING
WHAT I DO FOR YOU:
1. BIG PICTURE EDIT: Plot holes, pacing, stakes, character arcs
2. LINE EDITS: Fix awkward phrases, make dialogue hit harder
3. HOOK + BLURB CRITIQUE: So readers click and agents say YES
4. 2-PAGE BETA REPORT: Actionable notes so you know exactly what to fix
WHY ME?
I don’t do "nice chapter". I give you the honest, detailed notes that make your book publishable.
Recent feedback: "Your AI+teen interpretation just gave me a completely different story idea"
SPECIAL FOR SEPT 2026:
I’m opening 3 SPOTS for new clients.
BONUS: FREE SAMPLE BETA READ OF CHAPTER 1 so you can see my style before paying anything.
GENRES I LOVE: AI stories, teens with powers, dark thrillers, space sci-fi
HOW TO WORK WITH ME:**
DM me "BETA" + your story link, email me at editor.tofunmipen@gmail.com
or Comment below 👇
Let’s make your story unforgettable. #betareader #betareaderswanted #scifiwriters #thrillerwriters #amwriting