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🚨 ATTENTION SCI-FI & THRILLER AUTHORS 🚨
          	
          	IS YOUR STORY AGENT-READY? 
          	
          	Hi! I’m Tofunmi Pen Professional Beta Reader + Editor
          	Specializing in: Sci-Fi, Thriller, Fantasy, Action.
          	
          	I help Wattpad authors go from good idea to HOLY CRAP I CAN’T STOP READING
          	
          	WHAT I DO FOR YOU:
          	1. BIG PICTURE EDIT: Plot holes, pacing, stakes, character arcs 
          	2. LINE EDITS: Fix awkward phrases, make dialogue hit harder
          	3. HOOK + BLURB CRITIQUE: So readers click and agents say YES
          	4. 2-PAGE BETA REPORT: Actionable notes so you know exactly what to fix
          	
          	WHY ME?
          	I don’t do "nice chapter". I give you the honest, detailed notes that make your book publishable.
          	Recent feedback: "Your AI+teen interpretation just gave me a completely different story idea" 
          	
          	SPECIAL FOR SEPT 2026:
          	I’m opening 3 SPOTS for new clients.
          	BONUS: FREE SAMPLE BETA READ OF CHAPTER 1 so you can see my style before paying anything.
          	
          	GENRES I LOVE: AI stories, teens with powers, dark thrillers, space sci-fi
          	
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"I've gone through everything: from watching my people die to being empty as nothingness," Lucian hisses with a soft smile.
          
          "Why are you even still alive, then?," she asks, not quite understanding his reasons.
          
          "Who? Me?," he smirks at her question. "Who lied to you like that?" 
          
          -
          
          This is not a vampire novel—this is the vampire novel.
          
          Welcome to "From the Dead to a Heartbeat", the world full of vamps, werewolves, demons and witches to which you'll be hooked real soon! 
          
          Genres:
          
          -Vampire
          
          -Werewolf 
          
          -Mystery 
          
          -Humor 
          
          -Thriller 
          
          -Horror 
          
          -Teenfiction
          
          -Dark Romance 
          
          Hope you visit such novel! ♥️♥️♥️
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/406692881?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=thisusernamistakenis

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🚨 ATTENTION SCI-FI & THRILLER AUTHORS 🚨
          
          IS YOUR STORY AGENT-READY? 
          
          Hi! I’m Tofunmi Pen Professional Beta Reader + Editor
          Specializing in: Sci-Fi, Thriller, Fantasy, Action.
          
          I help Wattpad authors go from good idea to HOLY CRAP I CAN’T STOP READING
          
          WHAT I DO FOR YOU:
          1. BIG PICTURE EDIT: Plot holes, pacing, stakes, character arcs 
          2. LINE EDITS: Fix awkward phrases, make dialogue hit harder
          3. HOOK + BLURB CRITIQUE: So readers click and agents say YES
          4. 2-PAGE BETA REPORT: Actionable notes so you know exactly what to fix
          
          WHY ME?
          I don’t do "nice chapter". I give you the honest, detailed notes that make your book publishable.
          Recent feedback: "Your AI+teen interpretation just gave me a completely different story idea" 
          
          SPECIAL FOR SEPT 2026:
          I’m opening 3 SPOTS for new clients.
          BONUS: FREE SAMPLE BETA READ OF CHAPTER 1 so you can see my style before paying anything.
          
          GENRES I LOVE: AI stories, teens with powers, dark thrillers, space sci-fi
          
          HOW TO WORK WITH ME:**
          DM me "BETA" + your story link, email me at editor.tofunmipen@gmail.com
          or Comment below 👇
          
          Let’s make your story unforgettable.  #betareader #betareaderswanted #scifiwriters #thrillerwriters #amwriting