@ImAPimpNameSlickback this means the world to me! I truly hope people enjoy my story, and it looks like you have been. I love writing and it does feel good when people like what your write, so thank you so so so much! Honestly, it's people like you who are so supportive that keep this story going. Also, you do NOT write like a noob! Your story PB&J looks hilarious! As long as you enjoy writing, it doesn't matter what other people think (but I think you're pretty darn amazing!). Just write because you want to!! Thank you again for this amazing comment