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Hello! I’m trying to write a story that has a hint of romance. It’s called the Twelve Kingdoms. It’s about each zodiac sign having it’s own kingdom. When the kingdoms don’t get along a war is started. I was wondering if you could give me any advice on my writing? 

M U R D E R, Has been fully edited. It was more of a lay out update with songs to help the mood. Some edits have been made such as part 4 which has more detail in making out. Updates will continue. I should be finished by the end of this week with P A R T   13, thank you.

Major edits will be made on my page, and in my stories. Most will be different designs, and a new aesthetic. Thanks luvs