Thank you so so much <3 honestly, you made my day ^_^
Oh, you're right, it needs tons of editing. That's just the first draft and, therefore, extremelly flawed. I'll be sure to edit it this year, along with many other stories I wrote last year, though I don't think I'll post the revised versions here. You know, just in case... ;)
Anyway, your support and kindness made me really happy :D Thank you <3