nat

ok so i wrote a story and someone added it to their reading list and my day has officially been made. anyway check it out, i love criticism. next chapters coming out sometime today. 

hey i need some constructive criticism, could you read 2 of my books?
          - Detective Molly Kay (complete short story)
          - The Run Aways (still in progress, only 5 chapters)
          you dont have too, i just want to be the best writer i can