@larathecara hey!
I only got to read up to chapter 9 but so far it's really really good. You have a really nice style of writing. From what I've read, the book is really really good I think the only thing (it's not even a problem for me) that could be fixed is the spelling. I do know that English isn't your first language, and it's completely fine. I'm not bothered by the spelling. I personally think its a really good book.
Thanks so much, Enjoy the rest of your day :))