MiriamJ1
I like your characters but I can’t find the main problem / link of this story, usually there is a problem, a goal, … I am at chapter 10. I haven’t seen hints leading to it either. First I thought it was about family reconciliation but it ended about 2 chapters later.
vandana1704
@MiriamJ1 I am trying to portray the problems the protagonist faces after getting along with her newfound family. The story is a little slow-paced. I am working on improving that.