vanishamoerlie

Hi everyone! I rewrote the prologue and first two chapters of Parallel lines. Please go and read it. Thank you!

NorahEma

Hi the author of parallel lien recently I  read  ur book and all I can say great start 
          there was a lot mystery that will keep the readers interested in this book and  the intense moment  between the main characters it was hot I  can only say  keep going and do ur best to make this book even better so far there was one thing it look for me unenjoyable when  going from the past to present  its really hard because  it could cause a  confusion  which that what happened  to me  I thought I was reading a bout the husband  and I didn't realize it until the very few last paragraphs 

NorahEma

@NorahEma  of course thank u 
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vanishamoerlie

@NorahEma Hi, how are you? I just edited the prologue and the first 2 chapters. Please read it and let me now what you think about it.
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Tea-Toes

You have an eye for good stories went through cute stories found some great stories I haven't read yet 
          PM if u ever want recommendations about gr8 wattpad books

vanishamoerlie

@Tea-Toes Hi there. Hope you are doing well. I just updated and edited my story. Can you check it out? Just the prologue and first two chapters for now. Thank you! 
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vanishamoerlie

@Tea-Toes Hi there well thank you. I'll let you know. I have to finish a few stories first.
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